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“Pound”

Big pound, deep in my heart
Big stretch
Hurting
Yet so comfy
To resist

Big pound, so deep
Too deep to feel
Less or more
Pain.
Why is it?

Big pound, moving deeper
Moving fast
Rushing
Down into
My veins of blood

Big pound, so big
To feel
Yet
Hard to
Identify.

What is this pound?
Ache? Attack?
Stress?
Block of blood?
Unknown?

My pound, my heart
Confused to beat
Blood
From brain to
My soul.

My pound, oh how
It hurts me so
To move.

Copyright by Oukan (Steph)
This is something I made up for no reason. I had this feeling circling around my head alot. I just had to write down something that sorta shows some feeling. This feel is something I had long ago. It came back, yet I have to get rid of it.

It's a poem about my heart. My heart just beating with confusion on my emotions. It's wierd, yet it defines how strong I hold on to what I feel. It's like pressure of emotions what circle around your veins to your heart. The more it pumps, the faster it beats. Yet the faster it beats, the more it either hurts or takes your energy. Strange, but it's different from an ache.

Enjoy.^^
© 2005 - 2024 Oukan
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